Tuesday, March 3, 2009

पंखुडियाँ

ये गुलाब की सूखी पंखुडियां,
तुम्हारी याद दिलाती हैं,
कुछ खो दिया मैंने कहीं,
मुझे ये बताती हैं |

" कभी तोड़ा था मुझे डाली से,
अपने प्रिये को देने के लिए,
फिर रख दिया पन्नों के बीच,
ऐसे मुरझाने के लिए,

याद करो वह दिन जब ,
वो पुस्तक लेने आई थी,

 ............



--- ajay gautam 'aahat'
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12 comments:

  1. lanngdatyagiMarch 5, 2009 at 9:36 AM

    godly gonde...machaya hai...:D

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  2. Ajay GautamMarch 5, 2009 at 12:54 PM

    thank u priyanshu :)

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  3. @ngel ~March 25, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    hey its very sweet! apart from this I also liked " Aakansha" . Well I hope you wont mind if I say something - I never thought IITian could write such preety touching poems. llolzz just kidding. Keep writing ! tc

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  4. Ajay GautamJanuary 6, 2010 at 9:34 PM

    thanks for compliment somyaa :)

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2011 at 1:27 AM

    Bahut umda and mature kavita Gautam !
    Some words that you have used are unknown to me.Well balanced,pure flow of emotions.

    दोनी के अनुनादित धडकनों कों,
    काफी देर तक सुनती रही,

    gahri lines ! Keep it up !

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    bahut behTatrin likha h.....i really like it much..
    "har chij teri janib khinch lati h,
    tu hi bata kis kis se juda khud ko karu"

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  7. Ajay GautamSeptember 6, 2011 at 11:51 PM

    thank you bhartiji :)

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  8. Ajay GautamSeptember 7, 2011 at 12:03 AM

    @anonymous thank you :) neelam ji ?
    kya khhob kaha hai apne wah magar..

    "itni bhi chamak nahi mujhme jo sartaj pe sajaya jaun..
    nazar mein dhokha hai tere jauhari ya heere ki pahchan nahi" :)

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  9. sakshiDecember 22, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    wow i didn't know dat u write sooo gud....keep it up..

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  10. AnonymousDecember 5, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    Really..jst awsm

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  11. Ajay GautamFebruary 6, 2013 at 11:17 PM

    thanx a lot :)

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